美国留学如何书写个人陈述

　　主次不分，逻辑混乱

　　很多学生因为英文水平问题，往往在写作文书上抓不清主次，逻辑混乱，这样文书估计招生官连看下去心都没有吧。

　　所以，在写作时，无论是你英文水平不达标，还是英文水平很高，在写完之后也要请专业人士或者有经验人给把把关，修改修改。

　　写作不规范，用词不当

　　PS是很正规文书，不要用些口语化词语（kinda， sort of， wanna， it＇s， can＇t， shouldn＇t），最好让英语好人帮你改改。作为一个留学生，能把PS写通顺流畅绝对是加分项。

　　美国留学个人陈述参考范文

　　STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

　　’For Knowledge Itself Is Power’. This is one of my favorite precepts and at this point in my life when I am about to plete my graduation and my future spreads in front of me like a dream， this adage has never influenced my life more than this before.

　　Knowledge and proper training are essential to succeed in today＇s highly petitive world. The best place where I can achieve this is in the United States of America - the undisputed leader in developing new products and processes. Not only is America the birthplace of my chosen field of study， it has also nurtured it for it＇s full growth and continuous development. To achieve my goals， I want to pursue a Master＇s program in puter Science. It is the ideal way for me to gain the knowledge and skills to stand tall as a puter professional.

　　During my undergraduate studies， I acquired a prehensive knowledge of puter hardware in all its plexity. I also learnt of diverse software and their applications. The highly dedicated teaching staff of my college taught me the various concepts involved in the field of puter engineering. Some of the subjects I studied were puter graphics， puter methodology and algorithms， logic circuits， principles of munication engineering， C programming， object oriented programming as well as programming using different tools.

　　I take a keen interest in Networking and Database Management Systems. As a part of my final year curriculum， I am working on a project with one of the India＇s finest web-site designing panies - MicroGiga Info. Sys. Ltd. The aim of the project is to create a web-site. The web-site， called ＂Jobs4All＂， aims to provide the user with a job depending upon his qualifications. Various database concepts＇， programming scripts and the maintenance of a server are some of the features included in our web-site. Some of the products and tools used are ASP scripts， Java scripts， Microsoft Access ＇97， Personal Web Server， etc. I am also interested in System Programming. For this very reason， I have selected piler Construction as the elective subject for my final year.

　　There is truly no end to learning， as this has bee a world where a constant addition to abilities is the key to growth in a dynamic world. I am fortunate to belong to a family that places a high value of education. I have been given all the encouragement and facility to develop my talents and interests. I have pleted several courses in public speaking and leadership training. Sports， music and reading also fill my life. I was also one of the organizer＇s for the Open Software petition in TECHNOMANIA ＇98， which is an inter-college festival annually， organized annually by my college. I am also an active participant in various events held in other institutes.

　　I seek to fulfill my goals in an environment that encourages creativity and motivation. I feel confident that the staff and facilities in your institute will provide me with such an environment. I am well aware of the demands of studying in the more petitive American environment. I am certain that I am mentally and physically petent to succeed at your school. I am basically a hard working and a sincere person. My enthusiasm and urge to excel will help me to make the best use of every learning opportunity.

　　In conclusion I would like to say that the knowledge gained from 4 years of engineering has provided me with a solid foundation. This will certainly help me in my desire to specialize in my chosen field. My country India has a thriving software industry. I aim to study abroad and return with the skill and petence to find my mark and be a vital part of this booming， futuristic industry. I assure you of my sincerity， dedication and hard work.